Two down, four to go

It’s truly amazing just how much rubbish we’ve written in some of our first - and even second - drafts. In this latest pass over the Medieval II Total War chapter, we’ve corrected everything from “me love you long time” level grammar, to sentences so convoluted they’d be illegal in a government document, to statements that were Just Plain Wrong.

Also, we now have less than a hundred pages to edit this evening. If it wasn’t 21:30, that would be more reassuring.