In which we conclusively prove our need for an editor

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Our editor has just sent us her edits for a few of the chapters we’d already submitted. One gloriously tactful comment stood out in particular:

Authors: I see what you’re saying, but I don’t think this is a word. Please rephrase. Thanks.

Oh yes. We’re churning out the good stuff now.

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